Reading Like A Writer

Thanks to Lee Kofman for inviting me to contribute to her blog, ‘The Writer Laid Bare’. See below for a brief bio on Lee. Read my original contribution at: Reading like a Writer: A Guest Post by Jane Messer (

Reading has been essential to my development as a writer. I don’t just read as a reader, but always, invariably, I also read as a working writer. I’ve taught myself this way of reading through years of writing. Reading is still a pleasure, but it’s also work. Not for every book and often not during the first read of a work, but when I re-read, I’m reading very closely, at the level of phrases, lines, themes; I’m reading quite analytically, thinking about technique or the orientation of the work and how it’s affecting the reader, me.

I read closely when I’m curious to understand how a work has been constructed, be it the kind of language tropes it’s using (metaphor, metonymy, simile, etc), to how scenes are constructed, characterisation strategies, the pacing and so forth. Why was that scene suspenseful? Or noticing the points at which a character might shift from reliable to flawed, and questionable. I write notes, underline passages.

Sometimes, through this process of close reading, I discover something big that really helps me in my own writing.

Pages from The Corrections, showing handwritten notes..

This happened, for instance, when I was reading Jonathan Franzen’s The Corrections. The novel is black, comedic, heart-breaking and a serious commentary on contemporary America. Franzen’s protagonist, Chip, draws upon the reader’s sympathies and antagonisms. He takes risks that don’t pay off. I’d reach a point in a chapter where I’d be thinking, from here it’s surely going to wind down, ease up; but no, Chip would be brought further down.

Reading The Corrections closely helped me realise that I was usually trying to protect my characters from terrible things happening to them, or from their worst selves. And that I had to stop being so kind to them. ‘Make it worse,’ became my adage. These days, as a writing mentor, I see similar choices in the manuscripts of writers I am working with; that sometimes they too are, unhelpfully, protecting their characters from harm.

I admit my preference has always been for reading fiction, though I do also love the essay form, as well as narrative nonfiction. In essays and narrative nonfiction, the writer can use so many of the strategies we associate with fiction—narrative voice, dialogue, description, setting and so on.

One of my favourite essays is by the late Canadian writer Carol Shields, ‘Framing the Structure of a Novel’. It’s autobiographical, and opens with lines that I return to for a feeling of freedom as a writer, and which I use as a kind of base-line for what I want to create and what I’m looking for in any book, really:

‘A novel is a wild and overflowing thing. Its narrative, even when it is short and straightforward, includes a sort of encyclopedia of facts and notation and the grey spots in between, jumping from idea to idea, leaping continents and centuries and changes of mood. Novels—at least the ones I love to read—are stuffed with people, events, emotional upheavals and plateaus of despair…’

Carold Shields, Writer, July, 1998, ‘Framing the Structure of a Novel’

I feel we should always aim to expand our horizons when writing, push outwards to something even more daring than we dare, because writing is really hard, and it’s tempting to shrink down.

In recent years I’ve jumped the chasm from fiction to creative nonfiction writing. I discovered that even when writing as oneself, in telling the ‘truth’, the narrating ‘I’ is nevertheless a character who must be always interesting to others. And that to interest readers in yourself as a narrator can require strategic emphases, omissions, curation. There’s a great art to truth-telling.

In this writing transition, too, reading has been instrumental. In reading Deborah Levy or Helen Garner, for instance, I could see how both writers edit out much of the dross even when focussing on a prosaic, daily detail to say something profound. I learned from this short passage, for instance, by Deborah Levy, that I could shift from the small to the large in a flash, with the right preparation. Here, in her memoir The Cost of Living, which describes her life post-divorce, she’s walking up a steep, long hill back home where she’ll cook dinner for her daughter. The pacing, the resonances of moss, darkness and gravestones lead us perfectly through to the final line:

‘It was such a long walk in the dark. The night smelt of moss and the wet marble of the gravestones. I did not feel safe or unsafe, but somewhere in-between, liminal, passing from one life to another.’

The cost of living, deborah levy

Being open to a wide range of literary influences across a variety of genres supports innovative and agile writing. This is important even for genre writers focused on say romantic comedy or YA speculative. I read works in translation, Australian and international writers, YA, picture books, poetry, memoir. We’re all so blessed as writers, that reading is an essential part of our work.

Lee Kofman is the author of five works of creative nonfiction including The Dangerous Bride and Imperfect, and most recently her exploration of the writer’s life, writing process and the books that have shaped her, The Writer Laid Bare. Other writers Lee has invited in the past few months to contribute to her blog include Ashley Kalagian Blunt, on Striving for a writing routine, Graeme Simsion, on The title project, and Alice Robinson on Breaking through the publication barrier.

Author: Jane Messer

Author, Mentor, Manuscript Assessor - The Bold Ink

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